
Welcome to Romantic Friday Writers Challenge No. 46 for Friday 5th October 2012. RFWers is a fortnightly challenge that is founded by and hosted by and Donna Hole. For Challenge No. 46, participants are asked to write a text 400 words or less using the prompt, 'Birthday Madness'.
This story is a prequel to my on-going story about Paul & Jenny Holland & Co. If you haven't read the first part of this story, you can read it here.
'Thank you', replied Jenny, feeling perplexed, flattered and strangely attracted to this man.
'Oh really?' replied Jack lighting up as if he saw this as an opportunity. 'Where and when do you plan to go? I'm taking my plane on a short trip soon and I need a couple of passengers. How much flight-time do you have, Tom? Could you be my co-pilot?'
Said and done. Mr Richardson convinced them to change their travel plans and fly with him the next morning. But tonight they would celebrate his birthday.
Text copyright 2012 Christina Wigren
Word count according to WordCalc: 392; 'FCA' Full Critque Acceptable.
It's time for the Birthday Madness challenge, chosen to celebrate the joint birthdays of your hosts. We are looking for 400 words of prose or poetry in response to the prompt. You will find suggestions for storylines on the Challenges Page, but you're welcome to use your creativity however it strikes you.
You don't have to be a member to enter, but if you wish to sign up, go to the RFW site and submit your name to the linky.
For ease of reading, please write your post, copy the URL, then paste the direct link to the linky at the RFW site or wherever you see this list on member's sites.
If the voting set up works, you will be able to return here to vote once submissions close on late Sunday AEST (Oz time).
Any problems with linking, contact Denise at den.covey@gmail.com.
The birthday girls are looking forward to reading your entries between celebratory glasses of good stuff.
1. | Raelene Purtill | 5. | Linda Katmarian | 9. | Anne | |
2. | Adura Ojo | 6. | Roland Yeomans | 10. | Sally Stackhouse | |
3. | Yolanda Renee | 7. | Denise Covey | 11. | Anna of Annas Adornments | |
4. | Nilanjana Bose | 8. | N. R. Williams |
13 comments:
Lovely passage to add to the story about Jenny Anna, I am pleased to see that she is back in your writing and that we are learning a bit more about her trip.
I hope that there are still some more to come s I really want to know what happened not just whilst she was away but also with her children once she manages to get back home.
Talk about a cliffhanger ending.
Nice build up to the end. Some terrific description. I like her attraction for Jack.... Intrigue is such a GOOD thing.
What a great prequel and a few hints that things might have been a little sticky in her marriage before she undertook that disastrous trip. I look forward to more snippets of these characters. Well done.
Hi Anna, that is a terrific ending! I clicked your link and read the other excerpts too :) your characters are engaging and the story poignant and real.
Dear Tanya,
Thank you for commenting. You are first It was your comments from last couple of times that inspired me to return to Jenny's story.
I have already given us reason to grieve the loss of Jenny's photographer-friend, Tom Norton. Now, I've decide to make the pilot come to life and even make him an object of infatuation for Ms Holland.
Thank you for your support, Tanya.
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Dear Michael,
Thank you for your beautiful words about my writing. Your comments help me stay with it. I can even say that the photograph of you, with your warm and beautiful smile, has inspired me to give the Jack Richardson dimples. After writing this post, I've decided to let Jenny become a little infatuated in him.
(There is a reason why I have made him a shorter man rather than a taller. But that will become clearer later.)
Can't wait to read your post! But it's almost midnight and I have both Elisabet AND Erik with me. Erik is such a nightowl. I must see that he is asleep and not watching some film on his IPAD.
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Dear Sally,
Thank you for your continued support of my writing. You help me keep writing! I'll read your post tomorrow.
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Dear Nilanjana,
Thank you for taking the time and trouble of reading the whole story so far. It means a lot to me that you have done this. You can see that my texts may not always work so well as flash fiction, but connected together they may become a novella or a novel.
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Have a great weekend, all of you wonderful people!
Hugs from
Anna
Intriguing and the location adds some mystery as well. I look forward to more.
"Little did she know then, that it was to be her last meal for a very long time."
Love the way you end with a cliffhanger. I read recently that all chapters should end that way. Something I need to work on with my own writing.
Great story, can't wait to see where you take it!
Hi Anna. I'm so glad you ended up posting for RFW. You are a real trouper and your dedication is rewarded with a great story again. I really enjoyed your prequel. What an inspired idea to give Jenny her last meal for a long time in such a luxurious setting. I hope she enjoyed it. Sure would beat eating coconut flesh and drinking coconut milk...
You had me clinging on from beginning to end. Went back to the other excerpts and I totally enjoyed it! Can't wait for more.
Hi Anna
Sorry for being late. I guess this is Jack's last Birthday as well. I'd dream about that food too. Hehe.
Nancy
A fabulous intro to Jenny's later story. Cool to know how she ended up on the transportation for her disasterous trip. Fates are cruel.
What a great image (all that food) to torture someone with all those years.
Thanks for posting with us Anna.
......dhole
Hello Anna,
Loving the cliffhanger and the build up to it. Can't wait to see what happens next!:)
Anna,
I just awarded you the Liebster award. It's meant to help folks add to their followers. I hope you have fun with it!
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